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O, cameleer please hold on translated lyric
Hello everyone
I have just translated this lovely Iraqi lyric
It is a piece of gold
It is a very affecting lyric carrying much passion and torture toward a lover departed and no occasion to say goodbye to him\ her
These stories of love which we called ( platonic love ) now are not familiar
One still crying a year or all life sad and tortured, is not a part of our tradition nowadays
However, the lyric poem gives me additional world , the world of peace and the time when people were good-hearted and could see every face smiling, pleasing, , welcoming, and spreading friendly feeling
This is what I dedicated in my translation . it maybe a man is known by a word or a letter he says or writes. On the other hand , it maybe he or she dies and no one would mention
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O, cameleer please hold on
I have just a gentle reproof with them
Be kind, I did not say them goodbye
My soul kept following though my body is me
What shall I do with life if they depart?
My eyelids and my heart feel pain
a lover you drove away I love too much
not seeing him , I forgot my path
Patience for my rubbing, O Lord
He dissolved my body, and my tears flowed
Turning around , I saw nobody,
but the march was veiled by dust
I cried as if I were on fire
I followed their way and walked on tracks
Even their tracks are covered with sand
O, cameleer please hold on!
هذه الأغنية العراقية القديمة غناها عدد من المطربين العراقين منهم ( أمل خضير , عبد الجبار الدراجي , سعدي توفيق الخ ) وكان الأروع في ادائها ومن وجهة نظري سعدي توفيق الكفيف النظر والذي أعتقد لا يزال حيا . Hello everyone
I have just translated this lovely Iraqi lyric
It is a piece of gold
It is a very affecting lyric carrying much passion and torture toward a lover departed and no occasion to say goodbye to him\ her
These stories of love which we called ( platonic love ) now are not familiar
One still crying a year or all life sad and tortured, is not a part of our tradition nowadays
However, the lyric poem gives me additional world , the world of peace and the time when people were good-hearted and could see every face smiling, pleasing, , welcoming, and spreading friendly feeling
This is what I dedicated in my translation . it maybe a man is known by a word or a letter he says or writes. On the other hand , it maybe he or she dies and no one would mention
************
O, cameleer please hold on
I have just a gentle reproof with them
Be kind, I did not say them goodbye
My soul kept following though my body is me
What shall I do with life if they depart?
My eyelids and my heart feel pain
a lover you drove away I love too much
not seeing him , I forgot my path
Patience for my rubbing, O Lord
He dissolved my body, and my tears flowed
Turning around , I saw nobody,
but the march was veiled by dust
I cried as if I were on fire
I followed their way and walked on tracks
Even their tracks are covered with sand
O, cameleer please hold on!
أقدم هذا العمل المتواضع في الترجمة نقل الحروف ورسمها وفق منظور أدبي تقبله اللغة المترجم لها عسى ولعل يرتقي وينال السمعة الطيبة في نقل وإثراء التراث العراقي الجميل
تانيني صحت عمي يا جمّال
عندي عتاب وياهم يا جمّال
يا جمّال اصطبر ما ودعتهم
ظل بس الجسم والروح عدهم
شلي بدنياي يا عمي بعدهم؟!
جفوني وبالجفا تعذب الدلال
إلي بضعنك حبيب يحبه كَلبي
وعكَب عينه أهيم وانسى دربي
صبرني على فراكَه يا ربي
نحل جسمي برحيله والدمع سال
أصد لني الضعن محجوب بغبار
بجيت وشبت بدلالي النار
تبعت ضعونهم وامشي ع الاثار
حتى اثارهم غطتها لرمال
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