مُنعتُ الحجَّ أنكالا برفضي رشوةٌ فُرضتْ فقلبي اليومَ محزونُ
I was prevented from performing Hajj in defiance of *for refusing an imposed bribe so that my heart is sad today
Notice: in defiance of = correct phrase = in contempt of, in opposition to, in disobedience to
Correction : I was prevented from performing Hajj in defiance of my refusal to an imposed bribe so that my heart is sad today
OR better : You can say instead of (in defiance of )
I was prevented from performing Hajj as a punishment because I refused an imposed bribe so that my heart becomes sad today
رئيسُ الحزب قد نال من الحجـاج رشوتهم وهـل للمرتشي دِينُ
The party leader receives a bribe from the pilgrims, and does bribery have a religion.
Correction : it is a question I see
The party leader has received a bribe from pilgrim. Does a bribee have a religion?
رسول اللهِ قد قــــال "لراشٍي أو لمرتشِيٍ عقابُ الله مضمــونُ

The Messenger of God had said For a briber or a bribe-taker ** God's punishment is guaranteed
Correction: Messenger of Allah (has) said, " There is a guaranteed punishment of Allah to a briber or a bribee.> The word God is usually used by Christians to mean Jesus.
it does not mean Allah
بـلادي ظلمُها طال وطـول الظلم من كتلٍ طغتْ واستُفردت حيـنُ
ملاحظة عندما نقول بلادي ظلمها طال لا يعني أن البلد نفسه مظلم بل ظلم من يسكنه
البلد لا يملك الظلم أو ليس من خاصيته امتلاك الظلم ثم تنقل إلى الإنجليزبة حرفيا
In my country, its oppression is prolonged * and the length of the oppression is from blocks * overwhelmed and isolated for a while
Correction : The oppression in my country is prolonged taking its long period from the masses that tyrannically overwhelmed performing for a while

إذا ما قلتــمُ غـالى تعالوا وانظروا بلدي وفيه الشعبُ مسجونُ
If you say expensive * come and see my country * and the people are imprisoned.
Correction : If you think that my speech is overstated ,please come and visit my country to see how people altogether are imprisoned
لئنْ نظّمتُ أقـوالا وضد المعتدي قـولي ففي الإرهـابِ مرقونُ
If I organize my words * and against the aggressor my words * In terrorism I am included.
Correction : If I organized my words and against an aggressor I directed my words ( speech), then in terrorism I would be accused of
وإنْ حقّـّــرتُ تمثـالا ولم أعبد لهم صَنمــا لقالوا؛ الشيخُ مجنونُ
And if I slandered a statue * and did not worship an idol for them * they would say; The old man is crazy.
Correction : And if I demeaned a statue and did not worship an idol belongs to them, they would say; The sheikh is crazy
كــذا الإنسانُ ما زال يقتّـلُ كـل معترضٍ بنار الحقـدِ مشحونُ
This is how man still * kills every objector * with the fire of hatred charged.
Correction: That's the human being is charged with the fire of hatred ready to kill any objector on his way
طغى المحتلُّ محتالا فيمشي في جنازتنا وفي يـــده السكاكينُ
The occupier tyrannized a crook * he walks in our funeral * with knives.
Correction: The occupier has overpowered deceitfully taking steps in our funeral holding knives in his hand
فـعــمّ يقتــلُ الخال وذا يغتالُ والَـدهُ كأنّ الكـلّ فـرعـونُ
So he kills his uncle, and this kills his father, as if everyone is Pharaoh.
Correction: Uncle kills uncle and that one assassinates his father
It looks as if all were pharaohs
فمَن يرثـي لنا حالا تُخذنا في الملى هـزَءًا كأنْ علياءنا دونُ
Who will be sorry for our condition *people make fun of us* as if our heights are down
Correction: One who seems sorrowful for us managed his purpose in mockery as if our position was a lower
بنينا العـزّ أجيالا وإنّ العــز من أزلٍ بسيف العُـرْب مقـرونُ
We built glory for generations * and glory is from eternity * with the sword of the Arabs tied.
Correction : We have for long built the glory for generations
And that glory has been from ancient time bound by sword of Arabs
وهم يكسون سربالا من الأخلاق زيّنهُ اذا استنجدتهم عونُ
And they would wear a garment * of manners, and adorn themselves with * If you asked them for help - they were.
Correction : And they are clothed with a dress of morals
If you just asked them for help they were ready .
It is not necessary to mention ( ready to help it is understood omitted \ elision )
سُقينا الحبّ أطفالا وفي أثـداء مـُرضعتي كأن الجودَ مخزونُ
We used to water love when we were children *and on my mother's breast* as if generosity were stored up.
Correction : We used to suck \ water love since our childhood
and in my nurse's breasts as if the goodness was stored
نهـدُّ الأرض زلزالا إذا انتُهكتْ حَرائرُنـا ولا تغفـو لنا عَيـنُ
We will shake the earth with an earthquake * if our women are violated * and our eyes do not fall asleep.
Correction : We would shake the earth with an earthquake if our women's honour is violated, and our eyes would never fall asleep
حَوتْ طُـُبْيًا ومرقالا بيوتُ الشَعرما نُصبتْ وضرعُ الشاةِ مدهونُ
* It contained the full udder of the camel with the fast camel * The hair houses when built * And the udder of the sheep was anointed. ??
يعني هذه كناية أن بيوتهم المصنوعة من وبر النوق أو الأبل السريعة الجري ويشم منها رائحة ضرع الحيوان عامرة تلتقي الضيف وكذلك أغنامهم تدر بألبانها مدهون ضرعها كما يصف ...
لا أرى البيت موفقا رغم فهمي له حتى أن ترجمته تصبح مستحلية لأن تراكيبه ليست صحيحة !!
Correction: our tents contained a full udder of a fast camel as much as were built
And the udder of sheep there was always anointed
فلم نرضعْـهُ إتفالا حليبا غير ذي عُلبٍ به الإخلاصُ معجونُ
That is why we did not breastfeed him with drippers * unpackaged milk * in which sincerity is mixed.
Correction: That's why we did not breast-feed him with raw -unpacked milk, but with sincerity is mixed
فعل مركب
وكان الجود إنْ جال جوادًا قد دعى الجفلى وفي يده المواعـينُ
كان أم كأن ؟ أرى كأن أفضل من كان
And the generosity if he went around, was generous, he invited people to food in general, and he had bowls in his
hand.
هنا لا بد من تغيير جذري لا تستقيم الترجمة حرفيا
Correction : He was famous for generosity wherever he went
Whence he invited people to food publicly and bowls on his hand
على كُـوعيهِ قد سال إدام ُاللحم من مرقٍ وفي كلماته لِيْـنُ
On his elbows dropped meat broth, and in his words soft.
Correction : On his elbows dropped meat broth
and his speech is almost soft
إذا أنويْتَ ترحالا بلادُ العُرب قاطبة ً تــُدارُ بها الفناجيـنُ
If you intend to travel * all of the Arab countries * are used by cups of coffee.
Correction : If you intend to travel throughout Arab countries, you can see the cups of coffee are honourably offered
قـِـراهم كانَ مازال من الأخلاق مـدرسةً ويأمرُنا به الدِينُ
Their hospitality was still a school of morals and religion commands us
Correction : Their hospitality was still a school of morals and our religion commands us to do so
وأصفى طيبـُهم بـالا فقد ناموا بلا أرقٍ وما في الصدرِ مكنونُ
And purer than their kindness their anxiety * they slept without insomnia * and there is no endurance in their chest
Correction : By the virtue of their goodness they slept without insomnia and there is nothing which troubles their chest
ألا سعـديكَ يا خالا ستُجزى خلدَ جنّاتٍ عليها الخُنّـَسُ العِيـنُ
الأصح ستجزى جنات خُلدٍ

Be happy uncle* you will be rewarded with an eternal paradise * girls with small noses and wide eyes.
هذه ترجمتها ملائمة
Correction : Be happy uncle. You will be rewarded with immortal gardens on which there are girls with small noses and wide eyes
إذا أقبلنَ إقبـالا فهُـنّ الـدرُّ في صدفٍ وهُنّ البَيضُ مكنونُ
If they advance * they are pearls in the shell of a nacre * and they are preserved eggs.
Correction > If they step forward, they are pearls in seashells, and they preserved hidden eggs