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Two spirits talk.
waits , follows, listens,hears ,defends,consults,convinces,persuades....
Her inner voice echoes his whisphers,silence,breath,speech.oh !rosy speech,perfumed words as she imagines.her heart encompasses him.ye,he knows.does he know?she
My dear little sister your opinion is not at all simple I greatly appreciate .your important questions lead me to the way by which I wrote my story it is what is called in literature "Surrialism" "
is a trend and movement in literature influenced by Freud .The movement began1920 in Paris by Andrew Breton with manifesto)Du Surrialism(
,and preceded him the French poets Baudelaire, Apollinair ,and the Italian painter Giogrio,Chirico..Surrialism writers main interest was the interaction and effect of words and for this reason their writings are not easy to understand .Surrialism was the retort of Dadaism .The Surrealists mixed in their works the unconscious mind and blended it with the conscious mind .It is a revolution against all kinds of formal literary expression and they aimed to be free from formal rules They attached to the conscious in their works .
Getting back to your questions first your analysis of the story is right as reality is the opposite of imagination we are here with two spirits one of them found his happiness in transferring his echoes in writing and you as a reader have your complete imagination and ask yourself many questions "what is after all theses traces? .can this love see the light ?Are they suitable for each other ?Did they put all the considerations to turn their love real and not just an imagination? this is concluded in my question "what's about hers and his? and here I used the verbs refer to the third person because I mean "He or She"
The story is a blend between visual and imagination .concerning with your question why real love is just in our imagination I object and I assure to you that sublime feelings can create it , respect ,shyness can create real love mutual giving ,caring , justice and many .many flowers can be rendered don't be pessimistic we can sweeten the sour flavor of life .There is another important point I want to say our ability to choose is not of the instant moment it relies on our way of bringing –up ,cultural ,traditional and many other factors because failure in marriage has many other considerations not only because one of or say the two do not treat each other well .Finally my dear sister try to be more realistic in choice
REALLY I APPRECIATE ALL YOUR QUESTIONS
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waits , follows, listens,hears ,defends,consults,convinces,persuades....
Her inner voice echoes his whisphers,silence,breath,speech.oh !rosy speech,perfumed words as she imagines.her heart encompasses him.ye,he knows.does he know?she
doesn't know,..but what 's about his and hers
In my simple opinion, this short story refers to the harmony meeting of two spirits and melting in one unit as they are both have same thoughts, same spirit nature, same direction , and same temper . They love each other and always meet but in an imaginative world , but what's about reality?? Nothing exists.
Dear Najwa,
It's a story of short-spoken but with great concentrated meaning.
Your story leads me to impose this question.
Where does love exist in this strange and crazy world that makes us live it, taste it, and practice its whispers just in imagination?
A grammatical question :
Why do you put (s ) to these verbs ( waits , follows, listens,hears,defends,consults,convinces,persuades ) as they do not precede by third person pronoun or a singular name ?
I enjoyed reading your short story with many thanks
Yours,
Rana Khateeb
In my simple opinion, this short story refers to the harmony meeting of two spirits and melting in one unit as they are both have same thoughts, same spirit nature, same direction , and same temper . They love each other and always meet but in an imaginative world , but what's about reality?? Nothing exists.
Dear Najwa,
It's a story of short-spoken but with great concentrated meaning.
Your story leads me to impose this question.
Where does love exist in this strange and crazy world that makes us live it, taste it, and practice its whispers just in imagination?
A grammatical question :
Why do you put (s ) to these verbs ( waits , follows, listens,hears,defends,consults,convinces,persuades ) as they do not precede by third person pronoun or a singular name ?
I enjoyed reading your short story with many thanks
Yours,
Rana Khateeb
My dear little sister your opinion is not at all simple I greatly appreciate .your important questions lead me to the way by which I wrote my story it is what is called in literature "Surrialism" "
is a trend and movement in literature influenced by Freud .The movement began1920 in Paris by Andrew Breton with manifesto)Du Surrialism(
,and preceded him the French poets Baudelaire, Apollinair ,and the Italian painter Giogrio,Chirico..Surrialism writers main interest was the interaction and effect of words and for this reason their writings are not easy to understand .Surrialism was the retort of Dadaism .The Surrealists mixed in their works the unconscious mind and blended it with the conscious mind .It is a revolution against all kinds of formal literary expression and they aimed to be free from formal rules They attached to the conscious in their works .
Getting back to your questions first your analysis of the story is right as reality is the opposite of imagination we are here with two spirits one of them found his happiness in transferring his echoes in writing and you as a reader have your complete imagination and ask yourself many questions "what is after all theses traces? .can this love see the light ?Are they suitable for each other ?Did they put all the considerations to turn their love real and not just an imagination? this is concluded in my question "what's about hers and his? and here I used the verbs refer to the third person because I mean "He or She"
The story is a blend between visual and imagination .concerning with your question why real love is just in our imagination I object and I assure to you that sublime feelings can create it , respect ,shyness can create real love mutual giving ,caring , justice and many .many flowers can be rendered don't be pessimistic we can sweeten the sour flavor of life .There is another important point I want to say our ability to choose is not of the instant moment it relies on our way of bringing –up ,cultural ,traditional and many other factors because failure in marriage has many other considerations not only because one of or say the two do not treat each other well .Finally my dear sister try to be more realistic in choice
REALLY I APPRECIATE ALL YOUR QUESTIONS