let's face it

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  • ياسرالعمراني
    عضو الملتقى
    • 17-06-2007
    • 18

    let's face it

    When we wake up guys!! realy it's a shame on us to lie to ourselves and do not care about anything in our life as if our parents like a machine ,who have no time to thier own business;however,we have to do something for them and I'm talking here about whom just sleepier without any plan to his life and wait for father or mather to supplies him for money .I don't mean here to make yourself as an adult and do not order any help from your family,but what I mean here is to help them as much as you can.Besides,to do what they tell you and do not do what they dislike ,again I say that is not mean to lose your personality and become like "something"!!I know now you surprise and your mind says what is he talking about?? yes, it's right and I am writting now beacuse of this bad habits taht teenagers treat thier parents.
    So we have to ask:why teenager feel anger when thier family punishes them?? in other word what is going on in the world to see that huge gap between family and thier teenagers ?? realy there are a lot of reasons,but the begest ones is media and technology where child and teenager can make his secret life ,also with technology the internet becomes our new father and guide so that many teenagers do not close from thier family and if you ask me I say that due to the adults whom dive in thier business and forget children and tenagers and let them in front of that wolves' world without any vaccines(I don't mean it as a physical thing of cours!!).I am not as a psychologist but I try to find resolution to our problems that go bigger day after day.
    In kenitra for exapmle you can find these kinds of teenagers.Just go someday to Mcdonalds to see what I want to say ,realy it's a horrible fact to do not recognize your teen and child and let's face it ,this is a ridiculous and foolish thing ,please we have to try not bury our adolescents because they are realy our nature resourse not money etc.
    Also we have to be near of them when they need your assistance!! so what should we do ? in taht case it's better to read the books which focus on teenager and watching on shows that concentrate of adolescense issues ans so on.
    try to educate your teen taht Isalm is very important and has all solution of his problems.
    and last but not least you've to make a conversation between you and your teen especially about "what is sex"?
    or how can I jump teenager duration without mistakes and so on..........
    Peace be upon you;good lucke teenagers of Islam and morocco
  • وفاء
    عضو الملتقى
    • 09-09-2007
    • 98

    #2
    Dear brother Yasir,

    Your subject is fine but you need to check your spelling and grammar.
    Please take care

    Salam,
    Yours
    Dr. Wafa

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    • ياسرالعمراني
      عضو الملتقى
      • 17-06-2007
      • 18

      #3
      thanks a lot MIiss.Wafaa and I'll be very happy if thy highness show me my mistaks??THANKX AGAIN

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      • ياسرالعمراني
        عضو الملتقى
        • 17-06-2007
        • 18

        #4
        Excuse me to say that this topic is mine and I copyed it from my own blogwhich is www.elamrani.blog.com

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        • وفاء
          عضو الملتقى
          • 09-09-2007
          • 98

          #5
          Dear brother Yasir,

          Thank you so much for accepting my point of view.
          According to your request, I will do my best to help you find your mistakes , with lots of appreciation for having such an open mind.

          Good luck Not good lucke

          copied Not copyed

          and not to care Not do not care

          as if our parents are machines Not as if our parents like a machine

          to their Not to thier

          about the sleeping people Not about whom just
          sleepier

          mother Not mather
          to supply him with money Not to supplier him for money


          Sorry brother Yasir, these are some mistakes
          I may continue some other time
          Salam now because I need to go .
          Yours Sincerely

          Dr. Wafa

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          • د/ أحمد الليثي
            مستشار أدبي
            • 23-05-2007
            • 3878

            #6
            Dear Yasir,
            Please, accept my comments in the spirit they are written. I am afraid Dr. Wafa has been too kind in her comments. This, of course, is expected from any compassionate educator. However, let me be more direct and honest: there is not a single sentence that is error-free in your piece. You are writing English as if you are speaking colloquial Arabic. Spelling and grammar are really the least of your worries. You have a great deal of work to do before you could master the writing of a cohesive article that could make any sense at all.
            If you are willing to work hard and give it your best shot, I am sure you will be able to write in a much better way. Good luck.
            د. أحمد الليثي
            رئيس الجمعية الدولية لمترجمي العربية
            ATI
            www.atinternational.org

            تلك الدَّارُ الآخرةُ نجعلُها للذين لا يُريدون عُلُوًّا فى الأَرضِ ولا فَسادا والعاقبةُ للمتقين.
            *****
            فعِش للخيرِ ، إنَّ الخيرَ أبقى ... و ذكرُ اللهِ أَدْعَى بانشغالِـي.

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            • وفاء
              عضو الملتقى
              • 09-09-2007
              • 98

              #7
              Dear Dr. Ahmed Laithy,

              It has been so kind of you to trace the talk with brother Yasir. However, I was wondering why there is no committee for checking people's work before it is published .

              To be frank, you were right in what you said, and to be more frank, I found it so hard to go on in correcting the sentences without giving reasons for the change . Also, it would take me ages before I finish correcting the errors
              .
              Yours Sincerely,
              Dr. Wafa

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              • ياسرالعمراني
                عضو الملتقى
                • 17-06-2007
                • 18

                #8
                Thanks a lot for your advices .however,it's a scop for us to learn from each other .And as a result we know what are our mistakes and what should we do then.Also,I'm so happy because of your critic so do not be bashful to add or adjust anything seems not good or so forth.Finaly I thank you again and again..

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                • ياسرالعمراني
                  عضو الملتقى
                  • 17-06-2007
                  • 18

                  #9
                  So let's talk about how we can make our generation or our teen-agers more smart at languages.But here we've a big issue that when we learn English ,I mean its grammar ,phonetics and pronuciation, we find out other thing which is how to understand its folks!!in additional,when you read old peom you descover strange words ans in that case what should we do??u

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